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Trying so hard to write down these feelings as they come screaming out-
trying to hold off the pain in my hand long enough to stop skipping letters
Write down these thoughts- keep time to the sound of feet tapping,
Bricks falling.
The world is disintegrating  around us and all we can do is stare.
Everyone’s got a life to live,
Some foreign charity to give to and will we ever make a difference?
Can we really buy salvation for “Only 27 cents a day!”?

Turn a blind eye
I’m doing something good for humanity
An un-known, un-appreciated urban superman.
Superhero.
Superman is dead.

Traditional lifestyles
+ 9-5 existence
Take a moment to look out the window of your company car and see the world.
It’s flying past around you and all you can think to do is change the radio station.
Public radio. Current events.
CIA cover-ups.
Try to be a part of something
A good American knows the news.

Complain Complain Complain
Pay someone to listen
Psychiatry
An all-time high
A Prozac nation

And children with ADHD
And all sorts of asthma.
Buy a bigger car
A nicer house
An in-ground swimming pool
Pure-bred dog
Name-brand cat food
Hyphenated last name
And kids with bigger, more extravagant disorders.

What does life have to do with personal experience?
Pick up the parenting books
Pick up the pregnancy books
Popular Mechanics of
Being an American.

We’re all the pinnacle of
Style, perfection
Perfect people
Making money
Spending even more.

Only the best for us
Only the best for the U.S.
A country spoiled
And ROTTEN with
Materialism- driven like a stake into our consciousness.
Plain to see, but too deep to dig out.
Devouring
Depleting
Devoured
Depleted
Accounts, stores, -morales-

Send your children off to war
Out of sight out of mind
Ignore the warning signs.
Vote Republican
And this is what we’re fighting for.
Trying so hard to protect.
And this is what they’re dying for.
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The full title is Popular Mechanics for Americans...unfortunately that last 's' got cut off. I wrote this poem for a beat art project I had to do for school- I'm not sure how much I like it...it's not as focused as most of my poems- I don't like the vagueness of the idea in general, but I suppose that under the circumstances it came out good. Who knows? Maybe I'll learn to like it.
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:iconhenshell:
wow that is all i can say
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:iconjapanesegum:
Thanks for the fav's you guys : ) I'm really glad you liked it.
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~Maikaduriel Oct 26, 2004  Professional Photographer
I think you'd get along well with my dev-poet friend ~Eroala . This one sounds similar to some of her works, except she writes from the Australian perspective. I think I might refer her to you, as well.
On a more analytical note, this poem is incredibly interesting. Like, I read it a few times and kept picking things up, finding my mind making it more complex... it's certainly food for thought. Well done!
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~KarmaKid Oct 25, 2004   Writer
You really are amazing darling. Seriously. Consider yourself fav'd... it's kinda like being punk'd. but... i'm no ashton kutcher... Sorry bout that.
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~mistress-macabre Oct 25, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
This is AWESOME. I love it... I like how you structured it, very effective. I'm adding this to my faves.
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: ) Thank ya very much...I'm really glad you like it >.<
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~mistress-macabre Oct 25, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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